Baaaad English

I won’t use this product, not after reading the really odd English on it:

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Scientific mechanism that blocks the basic factor which causes the color penetration and dark spots and clarifies the skin to its original white and transparent skin.

Seriously?

Color penetration, like penile penetration, perhaps? And what’s with the unnecessary determiner the?

And I suppose we all have WHITE skin like MJ and transparent skin like …. I don’t know, the exhibits at The Body exhibit at the Science Center.

Really iffy this product. If they can’t afford a good translator they can’t afford to have QC at their factory. That’s what I think.

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